We created a short film approximately two minutes long and got it reviewed by the teacher of our class & also the students or peers of our class. The criticism that we got for our first short film was really good however it was more like a trailer rather than an opening sequence. This was good and we could use a basic idea of this film to make our opening sequence however it had to be an opening sequence not a trailer.

"FILM ONE" Trailer

Here is our first idea, as you can see it is more like a trailer rather than an opening sequence. This was our main problem and so we re edited and added some titles etc. to create this piece of film.

"FILMS TWO" Opening Sequence

As you can see this version is much more like an opening sequence also to add to that it looks a lot more professional, also the music suites better based on the rest of the storyline (The Whole Film). Re-editing the film made us realize that the music and the entire film needed to be thought through and changed as it wasn't to the best of our abilities.